Scores and Comments

23.c.pr.800.393

Taruna Sant

Application Details
Proposal TypeSpecific Cultural Project - Individual Artist
Request Amount
$25,000
Total Score253.000
Average Score42.167

Panelist Scores

Panelist Quality of Offerings Impact Track Record Total
Di Capua Deborah 18 18 18 54
Beitiks Meghan Moe 20 10 10 40
Binard Sally 1 0 0 1
Hayes Joseph 30 25 21 76
Mohan Erica 5 10 5 20
Rykaczewski Theresa 24 20 18 62

Comments
Di Capua Deborah - Score: 54.000
What the project entails is unclear to me. What the project will become is also unclear. I know it's to promote travel but how and why? What are the images of? why? what type of experience does the artist have doing this? I would like to better understand this project and what exactly it will be and what exactly it will be about. The biggest line item is online ads and i think that is problematic.
Beitiks Meghan Moe - Score: 40.000
  • Sadly, an instagram photo is not a replacement for a  resume.
  • The  proposal lacks significant  detail: I'm not even sure of what the project is  or how it will happen. 
Binard Sally - Score: 1.000

Project is completely unclear. Extremely vague.

Support materials lacking.

Support letter links to a website that has no information on it.
Hayes Joseph - Score: 76.000
I am touched by the sentiments expressed by this project. However, the precis seems too abstract to tell me what the project will actually accomplish in terms of the Goals, and how it will benefit the community. I don't see any evidence of a track record in this kind of project.
Mohan Erica - Score: 20.000

Project is incomprehensible.

Not sure what the applicant is applying for. All responses are abstract with no clear objective or goal.

Applicant did not submit a resume or work samples. Not sure if the applicant has any experience.
Rykaczewski Theresa - Score: 62.000

 

A more clear and thorough summary of what Ariavox is, the mission behind it and project specifics would help strengthen the proposal along with more support materials. Continue to elaborate by creating a passionate artist statement and more in depth goals that can be tied to actionable objectives.