Scores and Comments

25.c.pr.800.549

Application Details
Proposal Type	Specific Cultural Project - Individual Artist
Request Amount	$25,000
Total Score	394.000
Average Score	78.800

Panelist	Quality of Offerings	Impact	Track Record	Total
Fisher Naomi	24	24	22	70
Jean Edson	30	27	30	87
Kalin Betsy	27	27	23	77
Kehoe Katie	25	25	30	80
Ponce Libbi	25	30	25	80

Comments
Fisher Naomi - Score: 70.000
Quality of Offerings: 24 -2 music samples were fair -lists 30+ year history, but CV does not reflect this clearly -Listed opening act for musicians, but not clear when or where -Listed 3 awards, earlist in 1990 -Writing was not clear, I recommend getting someone to read this and help edit in the future Impact: 20 -vauge -no clear collaborators or musical partners -no venues listed Track Record: 18 -CV gave limited information, does not show the long history claimed -No support letters
Jean Edson - Score: 87.000
{No comments provided.}
Kalin Betsy - Score: 77.000
The information lacked details and there wasn't enough description provided to make an informed decision.
Kehoe Katie - Score: 80.000
Application could be strengthened by listing specifically who you have in mind collaborating with, confirming they are interested and securing and highlighting any additional partnerships this project would benefit by – such as a performance or recording venue. Explanations under Impact: Reach + Access could be strengthened if more detail was listed. Responses are noticeable short and lack detailed explanation.
Ponce Libbi - Score: 80.000
Some grammatical errors/ typos in application. Full, complete sentences are appreciated, and not entirely consistent in this application. More specific programming venues and documentation of this successfully carried out before in support materials will make the application stronger.