I couldn't find your website; Wix told me the domain wasn't connected to a site yet.  Since the website is mentioned in your marketing plan, it was a real disappointment not to find it.

Your mission statement is moving, and connects well to your programming.

Proofreading errors make your goals harder to grasp.  There is unnecessary repetition in the narrative that describes programming.  This distracts from your story.

The price structure for your programming is inspiring.

Thank you for making it clear that you intend to reach across language barriers through music and graphic arts.

It makes sense for you to survey your audience in Spanish -- thanks for making that clear.  Your evaluation plan depends heavily on press coverage and reviews.  Are you getting consistent press, that you trust to review you?  No press clippings turn up in your support materials.

There are many big changes from year to year in your budget -- for example, on lines 1, 2, 4, 5, 9, 12, and 18.  Adding budget notes to explain these swings would show your management in a better light.

Thank you for making it clear that you are working both to preserve the integrity of your historic site and to make it accessible.  When will the ramp to the Gallery be completed?  

E: Clear activities, but goals and objectives are not specifically tied to the activities; great partnerships but not clear what those partnerships enable/make possible for this organization; timeline is a cleaner, trimmer version of the activities section.

I: Appropriate opportunity to individual ratio; the narrative portion of this section is general and appears to be more focused on the organization's value than on the impacts envisioned for the 18-19 year for the community/audience in question.

M: Reporting to DCA has improved year over year; working toward sustainability - in progress; evaluation is present and seems to suggest elements that should have been present in the goals/objectives portion of the application.

A: Despite historic limitations of the facility, some - but only some - compliance issues have been addressed.

It would have been helpful to have a more precise explanation of the educational, economic, and cultural impact of the programming. 

I would suggest that you update your website more frequently.